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The Nehushta Serpent
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Short stories by David Satterlee
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Reader's theater for two female voices. Guys, don't ever assume that it's okay to not be sweet to your wives and girlfriends.
The Nehushta Serpent
Scene – In
the Market
Two women
in conservative dress meet in a market. They may be pushing carts or carrying
baskets. There are no extras in view. The younger speaks first, addressing the
older.
Rachel
Oh, Sister Abigail! I am so glad to
see you again. It has been some weeks and so much has come to pass.
Abigail
Yes, my dear Sister Rachel. May the
Lord’s blessings, comfort, and love be upon you in your time of distress.
Rachel
The Lord and his Church have been
exceedingly kind. Each family, in its turn have come to sit and break bread
with me. Pastor Thomas took the lead in putting my husband to rest after his
passing, and no trouble has come upon me.
Abigail
Then all is well. How come you here
this day up?
Rachel
Truth be told, I have
no lack of
sustenance. It is only a few things, a pint of cream to top a sweet indulgence
and a spool of green dyed thread that I seek.
Abigail
My dear Sister, give care lest you
commit the sin of gluttony. Surely if you share your indulgence with a
companion, you may rejoice together in the bounty of our Lord’s graciousness. I
could, in fact, be available this forenoon to come as a friend to you.
Rachel
It is our Lord’s true purpose for I
have your brass hair pin to return to you. I am afraid that I have delayed too
long.
Abigail
Not too long, but of apt sufficiency
for I have only recently promised it for a fortnight to Sister Sarah. You may
return it to me when I visit this day.
Rachel
Then the thing is done. My dear
Sister Abigail, you are such a treasure. I can never thank you in full measure
for your generosity, good council, and, I must say, your most excellent recipe.
Abigail
And did your husband find the recipe
to his liking?
Rachel
No truer words have been uttered. The
wretched man did roughly demand an extra helping and sopped the gravy to the
last drop with the head end of a second loaf.
Abigail
Then it was rightly prepared and
correctly served up. How is it that you have consented to serve under his cruel
hand these many years?
Rachel
Only through prayer, the power of our
Lord, and the strength of my marital vows. But he had hardened his heart and
would not quit that Jezebel.
(Pauses to draw a breath)
That very night, the stench of his
sin with her was upon him.
Abigail
Truly you related to me that you did
declare to him that the Nehushtan Serpent had been seen nearby…
Rachel
(interrupting)
…and yet he never consented to a
contrite spirit.
(both women pause reflectively.)
Abigail
(looking around)
Tell me, if you will, for we are alone and discreet. How did it go with him?
Rachel
He had retired to the sitting room
when the retching took him. It is certain that he has never worked so hard at
any task in his life as at the labor he put into evacuating himself. I did
pause to entertain regret.
Abigail
There is no need Sister Rachel. No
doubt you drew strength from the just and determined act of Jael.
Rachel
Yes, and just as you gave
instruction, I did twice pierce him with your hairpin on the leg.
Abigail
It was a needful thing and well done
in this instance. Pastor Thomas did certify that it was a true bite of the
Nehushtan Serpent.
Rachel
Amen.
Abigail
Will you remarry? There are single
men of the Church who turn their eyes toward you.
Rachel
No, Sister. After my Bobby, I have
had more than a sufficiency of the company of men.
Note:
The “Nehushtan” was a bronze snake, mounted on a pole that Moses used to cure
the Israelites from the bites of the snakes that God sent among them for their
unfaithfulness. (Numbers 21:4-9) King Hezekiah later destroyed this sacred
object when the Israelites began making sacrificial offerings to it. (2 Kings
18:4)
no lack of sustenance. It is only a few things, a pint of cream to top a sweet indulgence and a spool of green dyed thread that I seek.
Tell me, if you will, for we are alone and discreet. How did it go with him?
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